I am working on making sure my ideas are clear and that I get my points across so that they aren’t choppy and unclear. I’m also working on making sure that my quotes and interview evidence sounds good and works well with my points.

My revision goals are that my paper will be organized and that my thesis is strong and clear. Also that my paragraphs make sense, flow well, and get my points across.

  1. Finish writing out my thoughts.
  2. Input quotes where needed to make points clear.
  3. Make sure each paragraph ties to my thesis clearly.
  4. Grammar and punctuation.
  5. Make sure my ideas are complete thoughts and show the best of my ideas.
  6. Make sure my piece flows well.

My biggest challenge is making sure I stay on track on my thesis and my ideas. sometimes I go on tangents and they don’t 100% relate to what I’m writing about.

If this challenge becomes to difficult for me, I would email my professor or ask one of my peers to help me reword something or even just read it for advice.