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Month: November 2019

Blog 21

As you reflect on the class’s trajectory of readings in the context of this podcast, what role do you see language playing in your life? Work hard to articulate your relationship with language–the good, the bad, and the ugly. How important has language been to you in the past? How important is it now? What role do you see language playing in your future? 

Language plays a huge role in everyones life. For me, it helps me understand people and the world around me. Language gives me the opportunity to experience the world through sounds and understanding the people around me. My relationship with language is interesting. I know how to get my points across, but when it comes to making it clear, it gets foggy. I talk quite fast sometimes, and because I do that, I miss some points that make the story or information clear. Language can get confusing for some, especially if they know many languages. communicating is important for everyday life. We communicate so many things throughout the day that it is essential for life to be able to communicate, whether through ASL, talking, or even writing. Language was and still is important to my life, without communication I wouldn’t be where I am today. I wouldn’t be able to go to college, write papers, listen and understand lectures. It is essential to my future to be able to further my career in life, and even further my social life.

Revision of A Paragraph

The idea that education should reach into including the arts into our schools curriculum is favored by many, but some parents and teachers also disagree, along with the board of education. Back in my home town of Fairfield, Connecticut, there have been many budget cuts in the funding for art and music programs. They even threatened to take away the music classes, which so many students are a part of and claim that that is the part of the day that they look forward to the most. Many students are dealing with divorce in their families, and many of them enjoy the outlet of the arts to help with the stress of home life. The school boards don’t think about this when looking at budgeting and creating the curriculum. The school boards are required to follow the Common Core Standards; the standards say nothing about the arts program in it, making the art department the first thing to go when money gets tight. The Common Core standards also has a scoring process which determines budgeting, the schools will cut art classes to make their scores higher to get the most of the budget. These schools also take into consideration the No Child Left Behind Act of 2015. This act says that children must be tested between the grades of 3 to 8 and once in high school to make sure they are keeping up with the rest of the class. This act would help so many children get the correct structure in the sense that they can walk out of high school with the necessary knowledge. But since these tests only test reading, writing, and math, schools tend to cut arts out of the children’s schedule if they are falling behind. This leaves kids who are struggling in core classes not able to participate in the arts, that could help them cope with home life, and therefore create a better environment for them to succeed in other classes. The arts evoke creativity and thinking outside of the box. I don’t want our next generations of children to walk out of high school missing that opportunity, do you? Art not only will help our newer generations become more well rounded individuals, it will also help them cope with something that many children have to deal with nowadays, divorce.

Original

The idea that education should reach into including the arts into our schools curriculum is favored by many, but some parents and teachers also disagree, along with the board of education. Back in my home town of Fairfield, Connecticut, there have been many budget cuts in the funding for art and music programs. They even threatened to take away choir and the instrumental classes which so many students are a part of and claim that that is the part of the day that they look forward to the most. Many students are dealing with divorce in their families, and many of them enjoy the outlet of the arts to help with the stress of home life. The school boards don’t take this into consideration when looking at budgeting and creating the curriculum. The school boards are required to follow the Common Core Standards; in these standards it says nothing about the arts program in it, making the art department the first thing to go when money gets tight. The Common Core standards also have a scoring process which determines budgeting, the schools will cut art classes to make their scores higher to get the most of the budget. These schools also take into consideration the No Child Left Behind Act of 2015. This act states that children must be tested between the grades of 3 to 8 and once in high school to make sure they are keeping up with the rest of the class. This act would help so many children get the correct structure in the sense that they can walk out of high school with the necessary knowledge. But since these tests only test reading writing and math, schools tend to cut arts out of the children’s schedule if they are falling behind. This leaves kids who are struggling in core classes not able to participate in the arts, that could help them cope with home life, and therefore create a better environment for them to succeed in other classes. The arts evoke creativity and thinking outside of the box. I don’t want our next generations of children to walk out of high school missing that opportunity, do you? Art not only will help our newer generations become more well rounded individuals, it will also help them cope with something that many children have to deal with nowadays, divorce.

Multimodal Statement Draft

I plan on incorporating a picture from the study that I read into the piece of a girls drawing of a butterfly that can help show the readers a visual to help understand my writing about the study.

I also plan on incorporating a pop quote from my own personal story or from an observational study that I read. I wanted to include one of these quotes because I know it would get the readers attention and give them an idea of what the essay would be about.

  •  “I would sit with her with a white board and just draw as we talked about my life and my parents.” (personal story)
  • “Friends who had not experienced divorce were not able to provide support.” (other study)

I want to try and include a link to a video about divorce and its effects on child development.

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